Meri Prerana, Mere Rafi Sahab – Part 2 (in Hindi)
By Onika Setia
Mohd Rafi
१, दिल से भुलाने की कोशिश की बहुत मगर ,
तब भी हटी तेरी तस्वीर मेरी निगाहों से.
२, काश ए यार ! तेरे जैसे यह जहानवाले होते ,
तो यह ज़मीं जन्नत से कम न होती .
३,हमसे ना उठाया जाता था यह जिंदगी का बोझ तक,
तुमने साथ दिया तो होंसला बढ़ा हमारा.
४,नज़रे तुम्हें ढूढती हैं ,जुबान तेरा नाम लेती है ,
जब न हो कोई सहारा ,उसे मौत ढूढती रहती है.
५, मेरी आँखों का उजाला तू ,
मेरे दिल का सहारा तू,
मेरी राहों में चिराग जलाने वाले ,
मेरी तकदीर का सितारा तू.
६,तुम ना रूठो की रूठ जाएगी हमसे बहारे,
तुम पास होते तो हमें मौत का भी डर नहीं होता.
७,बहारें बी वहीँ होती हैं जहाँ आप होते हो ,
आपके बिना तो गुलिस्तान भी उजड़ा सा नज़र आता है.
८,मुहोबत में कभी यह दिन भी आये ,
जिधर देखा नज़रों ने ,उधर पाया तुम्हें .
यह कुछ शेर हैं जो हम उन्हें ( रफ़ी साहब) सुनना चाहते थे मगर हाय तकदीर ! यह एकलोता अरमान हमारा अधुरा रह गया ,इसीलिए अब इसे रफ़ी साहब के चाहने वालों से share करना चाहती हूँ..
इसके अलावा एक ग़ज़ल भी लिखी थी उनकी शान में —
मेरी शान ऐ- ग़ज़ल
१, यूँ तो हो जाता है दीदार फ़क़त तुम्हारी तस्वीर से मगर,
क्या ही होता लुत्फ़ गर तुम रूबरू होते.
२, एक अक्स तुम्हारा या तुम्हारी परछाई सही,
कुछ तो होता हासिल हम महज ख्यालों के सहारे ना होते.
३, वोह मीठी निगाह वोह तबसुम तुम्हारा ,
हम भी थे जिनके कायल , काश यह हमारे होते.
४, हसरत तुम्हारी क़दम बोसी की या एहतराम की होती ,
तुम्हारी इबादत तो करते बेशक गैरों की नज़र में काफिर होते.
५, तुमसे गुफ्तगू – ऐ – आरजू पूरी हो जाती चाँद लम्हों में,
मिल जाते गर वोह लम्हें उजालों भरे, तो जिंदगानी में यूँ अँधेरे ना होते .
६, मगर हाय यह कमनसीबी और सितम कुदरत का,
हम par ही गिरनी थी यह बिजली कज़ा बनकर ,वरना इसके इशारे कहीं और ना होते..
“JAI RAFI SAHAB”
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onika jee kya khub arz kiya hai rafi sahab ke babat
rajnish singer
Dear Onika jee,
superb about our’s beloved legendary singer Mohd. Rafi.
Please send me your’s cell number and are you a singer.
Thanks & Regards,
Suresh Kumar
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Dear Onika
Re your post 9, nahi nahi main Rafi Sahab ki beti nahi hoon. I know that one of his daughters has the same name. I am happy to be the daughter of my own father, who has also left this world, and who was one of the most generous and large hearted people I have seen in this world.
A couple of people on this site have asked if I am Rafi Sahab’s daughter. I think it is because I have the same name as his daughter and when i write my devotion also comes through. Well, I feel Rafi Sahab is so loved by every one of us that we all feel we could be related to him. I certainly feel that way, I think in spirit all Rafi fans are related.
And long live this feeling!
Nasreen
kasm se me roj Rafi SAHAB KO NET PER SEARCH KRTA HU ME KEI BAR UNHE DIL SE FEEL KARTA HU ME TO UNKA BHUT BADA FAIN HU
aameen ! he is a uniiversal gems ,kohinoor so bharat ratan is very short in front of his greatness.
onikaji, heartly salute you.Really superb.your ‘shayari’ and” ghazals” have touched our souls…….. ,AAPKA RAFI SAHAB KE LIYE PYAR KAABILAY TAARIF HAI. SAB KE DILON MEIN RAFI SAHAB KE LIYE PYAAR AISE HI BADTA RAHE…………SARKAR UNHE'”BHARAT RATNA” DE NA DE.. .HAMARE DILON MEIN WO “MAHAAN RATNA” BANKE SADA CHAMAKTE RAHENGE………
Dear Nasreen ji ,
mein yeh janna chahti hun ki kya aap Rafi Sahab ki beti hai ? agar haa ! kya aap meri facebook friend banegin? Iam very glad to make you as a facebook friend.
thanks
Simply superb. thanks
THANKS TO ALL RAFFI FANS TO GIVE ME COMPLIMENTS FOR MY POETRY.
Dear Nasreen ji ,
MEIN YEH TASSVUR KAR SAKTI HUN ,KI AGAR RAFI SAHAB HUMARE BEECH HOTE AUR MERI YEH TAMAM GAZLEIN ,SHAYRI VAGERA SUNNA SHOUK FARMATE TO BAHUT KHUSH HOTE ,MUJHE APNA AASHIRWAAD BHI DETE .KYONKI MUJHE YEH JANKARI HAI UNKE BARE MEIN KI UNHEIN ACHCHI AUR UMDA KISM KI GAZAL YA SHAYRI ,KAVITA GANE KA BAHUT SHOUK THA .AUR UNKI YAHI CHAHAT REHTI THI ,YAHI KOSHISH REHTI THI KI UNHEIN GANE KE LIYE HIGH LEVEL KI GAZALEN GANE KO MILE.WOH ISKA COST BHI LENA PASAND NAHIN KARTE THE.
MAGAR MEIN KAHAN KI KHUSH NASEEB KI RAFI SAHAB MERI GAZALON PARR NAZREN-INAYET KARTE . LEKIN HAA! AGAR AISA HOTA TO MEIN KHUSHI SE PAGAL HO JATI YA MAR JATI.
THANK YOU FOR COMPLIMENT.
Hi Onika
Well done!! What beautiful lines dedicated to Rafi Sahab. I read them painstakingly, as I am not that great at hindi. But even if it took some time, I did read them as they are very welll written and full of your devotion. If only the one it is written for could read them or hear them, I think he would give you his sweet smile and sing a special song just for you (maybe Bohut Shukriya badi meherbani). Just imagine if that happened, what would you do ??
But remember, his songs are always there for all of us. when i am listening, it is all for me. When you are listening, it is for you.
Dear Rafi Sahab, what have you done to us….we cannot listen to any other music in the way we listen to you. Our devotion just grows and grows.
And Onika has done such a wonderful job with these devotional lines. Loved them.
Nasreen
Dear Onika Setia,
Great feelings. You have written some wonderful poetry. The magic of Rafi saab is oozing in each line you have written. Your ‘out of the box’ write-ups add a new flavor to this pious forum. Please accept my compliments and best wishes.
-J.K. Bhagchandani
excellent poems for rafisaab from dilse….crores of his fans have already entered his soul in the form of his songs in their lives…..rafisaab is way of our life..his songs are for all aspects of our life…happy,sad,patriotic,romantic, religious,emotional,sentimental….
Dear Rafi fans, please give me response.
thanks for publish my poetry. i am so happy.